All Comments on 'Angel's Tease Ch. 04'

Perfect blend of fear and desire.

You are a rare writer who really can arouse and is one horny whore, no doubt! Me and my gf are so aroused that we are going to try out the scenes...but only comment that was bad was that my gf says that this whore is perpetually wet...like a water-tap!!! :P

let me guess, the first draft of the story probably got you pretty wet upon its completion.

and you just hadn't the spirit to do too many rewrites until you have enough fun playing with yourself.

titillating story, not much of character motivation and plot in there.

how about letting your fantasies unwind into reality? it would be fun if we could write a collaboration of what actually happens, together... mast upon it babe...