Strangers On The Bus

'Don't talk to...'

Different... short-ish... brilliant!
Lukas

Wear nylons

Next time, wear nylons and a garter belt under your pleated mini skirt. After you show off to the boys at school, you can show off your black seamed nylons and garter belt on the bus.

I need to ride that bus.

Very interesting. Short but really erotic.

Great story with excellent description

Very erotic. I will be looking for you on the next bus.

So good

Loved this story. So good. anonymous, hot, erotic.

Old Bus Roots

Excellent first story even allowing for the prejudice of this older man ! I think the anonomynity plus the taboo nature of the "relationship" make this story.The opening two paragraphs set the story up so well.
I think, however,that if you develop the theme in future you could experiment with the sexual content going rather less far,concentrating instead on what is going on inside the participants heads - fears, doubts, excitement etc.

More Please

A great sexy short story.

More of the same please.

I'm That Girl

I'm that girl on the bus. After a few days of this I want to follow him home for a real fuck. Make my dreams come true. Keep writting along this busline. Hot as hell.

love it!

I love a story line like this......one of my longstanding fantasies is along the lines of bus/train. I'll look for another one of these.......very exciting!

Definately a really good story!!!

Honey, you are good!!! I love girls that like to show off and tease!!! I'd like to meet 2 or 3 every day!!! Damn, I'd have wet shorts all the time!!!
I love the way you detail everything. You obviously have a very vivid imagination!!!
Sure hope you continue to wite and you'll let me know when it is posted!!!

Wow

This is the second of your pieces I've read today, and I must say they are *hot*. Adored this.

more, more, more...

God that was as if you read my mind... I always
wished that would happen to me on a bus...loved it!
*wink* jenna

Nicely done you little 'Slut'!!!

I have to say this one was great. The train one was read first, which peaked my interst. But the Bus, that was, well, HOT!

Masterpiece

You are great. I think I share the fantasy. Please publish more.

oh man

this is the second of your ive reead today.. both lead me to the big 'o'! oh yeah !

Hot Hot Hot

Gimme more....please

One of Gods little "angels"

True erotica, Thank you for bringing this beautiful story to this site. I only wish I could get on your bus, but then I would have to take you home? To my place!

teachers pet

I had this thought by the end.."As i opened my eyes I looked into the smiling face of Mr Briggs my Religous Education teacher. He licked his fingers suggestively and mouthed a 'thank you'. And to think, all the girls think he's gay...."

You were my original muse!

When I wrote The Teacher and the Bus, your story was its inspiration. I became fascinated with the whole scene and psychology of exhibitionism and voyeurism on that basis. I hope my story has complemented yours. Your writing is great, keep it up or at least encourage male readers to keep theirs up and female ones to keep theirs open! Well done.

Loved it

Great story. Had background but still got to the point. Original. HOT. Incredibly sexy.

wonderful story

I read your stories - all of them, last week. And I searched Literotica again today to read them all again. Nicely done, and very hot.

My step-brother used to do what Chris did to Lizzie, but we never went all the way. So this is what some of my fantacies are made of...

I've been reading literotica for about 5 years now, and never felt the need to leave a comment. You did it for me! write more!

Extremely well-written!

Bears the insightful stamp of personal experience, perhaps?

Deliciously naughty!

I know one school girl who needs a spanking!

Different...

Lovely - different theme... very sexy - forget about reality 'cos that's why we are here... well done

I beg to differ the last comment. I am a female, and maybe it never goes that far, but trust me, given the opportunity it will! I also was on a Greyhound, and fell asleep, and awoke to a guy fondling my breast. It was totally unwanted however ( by Mexican on his way back), but it is totally possible as to this story! Pretty hot as a story.

Similar Fantasies

Truth be told, I'm into these kinds of things too, but have never been bold enough to try to look for it myself. Strangers seem to find me though, so I guess things are good enough. One guy was trying to feel up my breasts on the bus, and there was this guy who was rubbing his dick on the crack of my ass in the train. It shocked me at first, but he never went far enough to actually try to touch me, though, so I kinda wish now that he did.

do it

sure would like to meet this gal I would give her more than just a finger fuck.

Oh God.

Damn if this doesn't bring back memories of being fondled by a cousin 10 years my senior. We were on a family trip, so it all happened in the back seat of the bus right under our parents noses. He later went on to eat my pussy in the cubicle of a public bathroom when we stopped for gas, the whore. Did I mention that he was engaged to my best friend's sister?

Short and HOT

Great short erotic story! One of my favorite. You are good...keep writing

amazing

this made me so wet, it's unbelievable

good story

totally unrealistic but a nice fantasy. Young high school girls just aren't into older men. Still if it gets people off without nudging them into really taking chances with young girls. You frequently hear of guys trying this stuff on buses and trains. Your ass is going to jail