All Comments on 'Brave New World Ch. 02'

This story has me so hooked. All of these characters are very well developed and it's incredible to experience your protagonist's sexual awakening. Please keep going with these. You've really got something solid here and I see a lot of room to continue developing if you are up for it. I'll certainly be on the lookout for it if you do decide to make a part 3.

The characters and the interactions are so well developed it leaves us wondering if this is really fiction! Please, please, PLEASE continue!

Hawk & Honey

Well you just lead us into another exciting adventure in the excitement of the unkown, what a great chapter that followed from the unexpected but much appreciated first chapter and then the tease of more, Althea please keep them coming. Neil W

Of course we want you to add another chapter! You and your editors produce the finest writing I've found on this site. And your mind is so gloriously filthy! The descriptions and the images they provoke are the height of eroticism! How I wish a woman like you were part of my life. I cannot help but fantasize about you being that woman. Absolutely spectacular story. Thanks for writing! I am so eager for the next chapter of this story. 5 stars, but only because I can't give you more!

You are the reason there needs to be a 6th star. 5 just isn't enough.

5 more Stars! Fantastic story. Fabulous description of three-some. And, absolutely there needs to be more with these characters. You have obviously set the table for a Kimberly-Steph-Marnie 3-some. We must have that, and more!

Of course you are considering adding a threesome with the three girls? Aren't you? Can hardly wait.

Once again you have produced a well developed chapter detailed and laiden with sexual pleasure of mamoth proportions. The details are far beyond my own dreaming so as someone has already indicated 5 stars because there aren't more availble. Waiting in anticipation for the next chapter with Chain Steph and Marnie threesome.... Thank you for a great read!

My God! That was amazing! I'm dying for Marnie, Steph and Kimberly's tryst.

There are people getting published who don't have half your writing skills. This was excellent from front to back.

Not as entrancing as the first chapter but still a delicious read.

Would love a chapter with Kimberly Steph and Marnie.

Excellent. Pls give us part 3.

AltheaRose, thank you again for allowing me to be part of this. Your stories are so realistic, with characters we love and experiences we can all hope to become part of.

Once again a very well written part of a great story....do keep this story going xo

Absolutely loved it - and I'd really love to read about how the tryst with Marnie, Steph and Kimberly develops! Keep on writing, your stories are amazing!

The first chapter was so well developed, making it much more realistic. Your writing is obviously maturing. I think the second chapter is an improvement over the first. When it seems that you actually lived the events of the story, it shows your writing has hit its mark.

Althea, I loved it!

Please do a part 3 with Marnie, Steph and Kimberly.

This includes almost all the stuff I love - thank you for another amazing story! I'm looking forward to more....please.....

Don't stop now!!!!! We need the third installment featuring the three gals and a winding up of the story! Please don't leave us in a lurch! By the way--the first two chapters were excellent panty poppers!!!!

A few more chapters would be hugely appreciated!

So hot

You write so well!

You melted me with the prequel and then did it again in this chapter. Not much of me left now. I need a rest.

Two of the hottest stories ever. Loved it.

Will need much more.

Good but cons are that sex is to short and with break. Less break more details and longer sex.

Thanks again Althea.

I just read both chapters and loved it. All of it, from the initial proposition, to Marnie and Kimberly experimenting to the climax of the threesome was very well thought out and written. Not to mention desperately hot.

5 stars and I need to keep an eye out for your work.

There absolutely needs to be a third chapter to this! Enjoyed the first two very much, thank you for sharing them with us.

Looking forward to chapter 3 of this excellent tale. :-)

Great! This really deserves at least another chapter.

You have a real gift. Please don't deny us the three ladies together.

May we have more please ! Oh yes and bring on the pegging !! Lol. ! Kevin

Please let us have the story of the three ladies! That will be so hot, and something I can only imagine while satisfying myself!

Jan

and as other readers have commented, there really ought to be a Chapter 3 to end this story. It was way hotter than most stories posted here, and needed more than five stars.

This is both hot and a fun story. I liked both parts of this story. It was totally believable, which makes it more relatable.

And yes, I would like to hear more about Marnie, Steph and Kimberly.

I really, really, really, really, really want to read Marnie, Steph and Kimberly's story, please! I love your work and I'm anxiously waiting for a new story from you. Hurry back, I miss your stories!

I can see how there’s so much in here for male or female, gay or straight readers. Equal opportunity love & jerkoff material! The man was a bit of a cardboard cut out, though horny & caring. Each of the women had a more unique & developed personality with tenderness and sensuality. I liked how they all cherished Marnie, & her awakening.. Bringing in another man, or will the girls be using their strapons? Do remember this is your own story, your sacred responsibility.

A very, very hot story. I'm so jealous of Corey... Ha ha! I really enjoyed your writing.

Loved them. More of them please maybe even steph, kimberley and marnie but don't leave poor cory out

Very well written and entertaining as well as a big turn on!

Thank you for posting, and I hope you return with more.

Zeb

Such a hot story, has detail outside of sex without losing my interest. Every character is relatable and sexy as hell! Would love to see the three girls enjoy each other all together, or even just more of Marnie and Chain, maybe a new guy with Steph and Marnie - could a foursome be on the cards?😍😍

Most enjoyable.

The sequence is about the idea of three, so perhaps the girls getting together - sorry Cory - would complete the journey best. I'd certainly like to read it!

First class piece of story telling and character development - and sexy with it. Well done you.

Now you have get the three girls together to complete the trilogy. Can’t wait!

Thank you.

Where and when can we expect chapter 3. Can’t wait...

Oh please, please continue this story arc!

After reading this again, I still love it.

And, I would still like to hear more about Marnie, Steph and Kimberly.

Wow, again!

you have a great creative art of delivering wonderful erotica without it being seedy. This short series is the first reading I have had of your work and it will not be the last.

I really would love to read the natural follow on of Marnie, Kimberly and Steph. I believe that you would make many of your followers very happy!

Beautiful imagination and very well written - It would be great to hear the continuation with the three ladies and the strap ons- poor guy hope he can handle that - without too much pain - hahaha

Loved the storyline, loved the personalities,. Any chance of continuing the story with the three ladies sexual adventures?

You’re a good writer...you paint a good picture with your words. The storyline is good as well...keep going, you never know where it’ll lead...

Would have to see another story about these characters

Still love it. I read this to my wife and she liked it just as much. If you ever return to writing, I would welcome a third chapter.

Yes! More Marnie and friends. I love the way you’ve taken her sexual awaking from “sex is not important” to the door opening to a brave new world. You write so beautifully about how Marnie builds to her orgasms, it’s so erotic to climb the mountain with her.

I’d be interested in seeing how broad this brave new world is after the three women complete the circle. I find all the ass play so sexy and would like to see you return to Cory and the strap on. In this new reality I’d like to see you break the bi taboo for men. Your story is so free and open to new experiences that It would feel totally organic for you to introduce another man or two to Marnie, at the same time of course.

Yes, PLEASE, tell us more about these lovers! "Innocent unleashed" and "friends to lovers" are the closest things I have to a fetish; seeing both combined, with such stellar storytelling, makes for one of the best tales I've read here...

Truly excellent story from the female perspective.

Great author, the story kept a fast pace. 5/5

Very well done. I enjoyed the woman's point of view. This was not another wham, bam, thank you mam tale. The seduction and gradual arousal were just as much a major part of the story as the actual sex. I would love to see the story continue. Thanks for writing it.

So HOT!!! PLEASE write a third story!

More please :)

So cool to take the classic male threesome fantasy and tell it from your point of view, where Cory's desire is a resource but not the driving force in what happens.

sexy, and erotic