Unaware to any of us, my mom and Beth were walking pass the oval office and heard moans and slurping sounds coming from inside. Beth opens the door and was stun to see us all naked, sucking, slurping, and touching each other.
OK how many grammatical errors do we see here? At least 3 come on now ask literotica for a editor It's impossible to get excited about a story when it seems it was written by an illiterate person
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Anonymous10/30/04
not bad
needed more girl - girl action after all they all have huie boobs. should of brought the sister in sooner, and had her do all the women and tge mother.
Spelling and Grammar!
The spelling and grammatical problems continue in this part of the story!
It is quiet a storey
I licked the part with the. Sweaty tits wer slapping her face.
OMG did you actually graduate high school?
Unaware to any of us, my mom and Beth were walking pass the oval office and heard moans and slurping sounds coming from inside. Beth opens the door and was stun to see us all naked, sucking, slurping, and touching each other.
OK how many grammatical errors do we see here? At least 3 come on now ask literotica for a editor It's impossible to get excited about a story when it seems it was written by an illiterate person
not bad
needed more girl - girl action after all they all have huie boobs. should of brought the sister in sooner, and had her do all the women and tge mother.
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