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pretty crap
not at all gd not lieing here this is by far the worst story i have ever read. where was the mind control?? didnt belong in this catagory at all. i'd try to write more details and better stories
mind control?
i think the first comment is a little harsh but i agree that this would have been better under first time or maybe explain some kind of mind control that was making her act the way she was. Something in the dice?
MC Doesn't have to be explicit
Just because this story didn't have 26 paragraphs of someone swinging a watch in front of someone doesn't mean it isn't an MC story! There is implicit MC here and the story is hot
Well done!
MichelleLovesTo, huh?
Well, it was a pretty good imitation of me, but you're at your best when you're you!
Michelle
The Knack Rocks!
Excellent interpretation of a song! Cute details like her thoughts and garments. Great job!
What the fuck is this shit?
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