All Comments on 'Happy Anniversary Darling Ch. 02'

At last a story with a good resolution. I'm so tired of stories were your left with a feeling of futility a sence that nothing will be done or the victim joins in their own victimization please more stories with a good ending. Stop the futility.

I feel that you rushed your ending and left out a lot of detail that would have made your story feel more complete. Don't get me wrong, this was an excellent two part story, but Chapter 2 needs a rewrite.

Like the first comment, I thought the ending was too rushed, not set up well enough. The first part was good, but needed some more character development also, as to how the women felt, how they were dealing w/ what had happened to them.

this and n&p are a disconnect. the 3 brothers were told it was bad manners to drug and rape, then the 2 ladies go looking for blacks?

20 years happily married,three kids,and all of a sudden she discovers jungle bunnies and her husband decides he likes it? Who thinks up this shit?!!!