All Comments on 'It Started as a Quiet Night Ch. 02'
by farhorizonblue
- 13 Comments
Anonymousover 6 years agoJust one more way to demonstrate your contempt for women, and marriage. It must really suck . . .
gordo12over 6 years agoIf you're going to continue this unlikely plot at least finish it or put up some decent length chapters.
This segment is approx 1300 words. That's about 1/3 of a average 3700 word page on Lit. 2*
Anonymousover 6 years agoOK, you got me going. It's not a great story (although much better than some on this site) but I do want to hear the rest. Just don't wait there weeks or even one or I'll probably lose interest.
Anonymousover 6 years agoA seizure or a moral breakdown? Either will work for a divorce
Anonymousabout 6 years agoShe should have quit when she said that her husband would have been OK with this, but NO she has to say, the hell with it. I wish the husband would catch all 3 of them, and then tell the 2 guys to draw straws for her, because she isn't worth it. If you would have made the story to include the husband with one of the guys, as they would be swinging at that point, with no lying or cheating involved. Pretty much all of these stories on whatever site include a married wife and single guys. single guys don't give a shit if they ruin a marriage, and obviously a married woman doesn't either. It is pretty clear why the divorce rate is at 50%, as single guys cant keep their dicks in their pants, and the married women are all looking for something better in the sex department for a night or a little while, and they ruin relationships. I hope all the married women who divorce get nailed in the divorce. They make me sick. If you make a part 3, somehow get the husband back and involved in the story, or if not, have him catch her and kick the young punks ass, and hers too. Maybe put her in the hospital and damage her pussy so she cannot fuck again. That should teach her.
Anonymousover 5 years agoGlad you stopped at two stories or did mom catch you and ground you.
Vitriolhackalmost 5 years agoClaire is insatiable; i would have wanted to read some more about Claire, I mean, who does not like a female heroine who elevates her slutty attitude to a sexual art form.
26thNCalmost 5 years agoGood thing her red bra was peaking, cause your writing certainly.isn't.
Mrhappy4aaabout 3 years agoHopefully she dies from AIDS....just quit while you're behind.
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