All Comments on 'The Contractor Ch. 05-06'

Uncle Hurley is in Oregon, a lot more than two and a half hours from El Cajon. I assume that was a mistake, or maybe I am being too geographically literal. But you wrote about taking three days to drive from Vancouver to San Diego?

I looked for this story on the other site, since I like to read them in one sitting. Didn't find it there and it seems I have read it before, but perhaps not?

He bought Rick's Airstream for a buck and moved to Idyllwild which is west of Palm Springs in the San Jacinto Mountains.

Roz does seem to really want a piece of our hero. I really do not think that Sally will be into sharing at all.

I think I've read this before too, just don't remember where and that it was a very good story.

This story has a "Jack Reacher" feel to it. The tension toward the outcome is certainly building nicely. Looking forward to the rest of the story,

Thank you.

As a spy - oops, Contracter, you've created the best singular justification for his sleeaping around. No emotional entanglements.

IIRC, in The Brotherhood of the Rose, Robert Mitchum advised Peter Straus, "Women are the greatest form of stress relief known to man, but for us they can be nothing more." Just like Straus' spy, Rick has doubts about that one too.

Nice work. Keep it up.

Ros is trouble, big trouble with a capital T.

Unless Sally is up for it, l’d stay well away from Rosalind.

But this is Lit.

They’ll all end in bed together, with Ric fucking them both and mother licking daughter.

5/5