All Comments on 'For You'

Short but a good pleasure filled read...Hope there's more to cum from you...

Just me, OK? Any forced fucking is a turn-off.

I'm not into BDSM or S&M or what you may call it. However, I have no problem with those who are and don't mind reading about it. It can turn me on up to a point. But this?

"I wanted you to cut me, deep down my back, or just under my breasts. Didn't you want to feel the my blood flow"

Oh, hell no. Jesus... that's insane. Aside from that, this needs some proof reading.

This really is much better than the comments below suggest.

There’s a real hunger in your writing that shines through, showing the hunger and want you desire with your gentleman friend.

Hot, sexy and best of all deeply dark in conveying your feelings of willing to let blood during lust filled moments.