All Comments on 'Before The Kids Wake Up'

YES!

well done,nice combonatoin of romance and eroticism

Wonderfully sweet and romantic... and nasty and dirty! I really loved the way you showed how a couple can act out a fantasy in the bedroom without losing respect for each other outside... Calling your lover a slut at the height of passion doesn't mean you really think she's a slut when you are dressed and ready to take the kids to school. Absolutely wonderful.

First of all thank you for taking the time to write such a wonderful story, it is exactly like my life! The feelings I got when I read it were those of love tenderness, understanding and desire.I just wanted to give my husband a big hug but he isn't here right now he is fighting the war so I hugged one of the kids and sent my husband a card! please write more chapters or stories , if they are of the same calibur as this one you need to get them published. thanks again

As much as I love the variety of stories...it was so great to read something that approximates my intimacy with my partner. I like the kink, taboo, etc. as much as the next randy grrrl but it was wonderful to read my life: two adults, completely in love and intimate with one another in all parts of their life, satisfying each other and being more than enough as just the people that they are.

very good story keep up the good work

I can only hope that anal with my boyfriend will be this hot (we're getting there! haha)

my hubby loved this story he had me bend over the desk and shoved up my ass and it felt great

Wow.....simply wow!