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Very neat!
I liked this a lot, and admire the heck out of you for doing something different with creative poetry. My hat's off! Well done!
Good job...
Good luck Art! Inventive and fun ... as always!
Great Job
You outdone yourself on this one...I loved it
LOL
I liked your witches chant. Funny.
Good luck.
Awseome
this was great. The first stop in my reading today and it was a great place to begin. Thanks bunches :)
-Colly
A Hilarious Halloween story of great fun written
By none other than our wizard of words, the knight of the pen Our ET. Another surprise not because he writes so well. It's because he will always beam in brightness his subject matter always is perfection.
His heart wraps the words into sentences. His love of writing must always have a venue. There he unfurls his magic
with words that speak. Where he may take us on a flight but for only a moment.. He is quickly onto the next his new baby will come forth with excitement and greater talent.
Thank you,
Lexi
for halloween
well art my dear husband, you done a great job as always. keep up the good work and give us all a little something to look forward to :) waiting on your next one now my love
it's witchy
art, great job. i'm on my seat waiting for your next one. hurry up. lol
LOVE ALWAYS, SANDRA
Loved it!
As always Art you have out done yourself. I loved it!
Erotic Poetry...?
Just curious as to why this wasn't placed in Erotic Poetry. Just to enter the contest? It really is more of a poem than a story, and a darned good one at that. This can never be imitated and is unique. Good luck!!
The peril of the spell-checker
I read and enjoyed it, a different read,
Then brain started 'Edit mode', hurting my head,
The third verse, it hit me, the line after 'smile',
How can I forgive you, for spelling 'vial', vile'?
Just kidding - a fun read!
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