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Perfect for the up and coming holiday.
And fairly well written. Thank you.
Interesting~
Discriptive, full of charactor, roller coaster ride of words and definetely a Halloween 'spoof' for Lit, Good Luck (~_*) Happy Halloween~
Shivering
Colly,
That was a great story. It left me shivering as you never know what you will meet in the dark.
I especially liked the way you intertwined the past and the present.
Good luck.
Creeped out.
Damn Colly,
That is creepy! Left me wondering though, again you spaced the giving of information perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
*hugs* from a shivery Becca
Excellent
very eloquent, with just the right amount of horror and intrigue
An all new definition ...
... of sexual predator. I love the direction in which you took the story!
A perfect story ...
For a Halloween contest. Shivers ran up my spine but I loved every moment of it. Good luck Colly!
Damn, Colly!
I am in awe at your deft hand in this story! Hot sex and lust that turns to horror at the perfect moment, and you leave us guessing at evey turn. This is wonderful!
very offbeat....
Your descriptions are pretty amazing, as always. Just curious as to why the sexual element of many of your stories seems to revolve around 2 or more women. There are so many other possibilities, it seems like you might want to try them just for the sake of variety. I confess my small brain did not get the ending....Surely, this was not the inspector seducing him, but one of the unheard women upstairs? Or a different woman entirely? Still, fascinating story, the description in the first two paragraphs was about as extraordinary as I've read!
Really Scary
This was really scary, all the way through and I love the way you brought everything together at the end. It was sexy too, not a usual combination.
Well done.
Interesting twist too...the gang member/rapist. heh heh...I'll not say anymore.
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