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Darkness In My Mind

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by thepaleeyes03/07/06

again...

hey, i must concede that ur poem hasn't moved me or touched the way ur stories did...

the wording and lines are quite immature.... the rythm was quite childish.... some phrases are sweet as you though.... better luck, man...

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by G_Stormm08/09/06

Well I liked it..

I thought it was pretty good...but not as good as your stories.

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