All Comments on 'To Shower, Or Not To Shower'

whats his name again............

Nice story. Ithought this story was a threesome, but couldn't figure out when Josh left and Chad made his appearance. Silly of me, I know, but you had me going. Hopefully next story you'll proof read it and maybe have it edited by someone other than Chad and Josh.

Talk about a blonde moment! Thanks to y'all that pointed out my error. I was thinking of another story and got my names confused. The character's name is Chad ... Josh has to wait his turn for another story. LOL

Now this is a loving wife story. Great story.

yes, even with the confusion (Simply_Cyn's confusion), the story is still boiling, sizzlin' hot!

stories about wives sleeping with any man who can spit out sweet talks with dig equipments are for mastubatory porn purposes,,,

stories like this one, where the bond between two married people are so strong, so precious, even after years of togetherness, with all kinds of struggle and children driving both insane --- if you're a man, you wish the wife was yours; and if you're a woman, you wish the hubby's yours,,,

special people are those who are able and willing to make the most ordinary things/events, like waking up in the morning, into extraordinary encounters between themselves, who treat each other like special guests in their lives

How many wives return home instead of going to work to be with hubbie, like Chloe??

And we know Josh Chad enjoyed it, right?

the story is about 3/4 of a Lit page long, within the same screen.

it started out with the husband having a "Josh" name and then 1/3 of the way down the same page --- it's so short a duration that his hard dick is still standing as Chloe the wife spotted it a few seconds before --- he's now "Chad"?

shouldn't the wife's name become Hilary, too? at least that way we know the narrator is totally drunk, as he attempted to tell a loving story! it would have worked better than this, surely!

if the author had gone that route, he/she won't have been blamed; but this, this is NOT excusable,,,, now, I can be lenient if the story is 20 pages, with 10 or more characters,,,,,, but NOT a 3/4 page story that took place during no more than a few moments after the husband had just finished shower!

it's actually a rather romantic story; but such TOTAL CARELESSNESS, such display of disrespect for the characters as well as readers, it turned me off immediately

Got lost on what happened to Josh and where Chad came from.

Good living wife story. No cheating needed.

Seems to be one loving couple with no outside help. Good story.

Despite the Josh/Chad problem, I liked this. I liken the occasional short tale of actual loving spouses that aren't screwing each other over.