All Comments on 'Overdue'

I like the characters and the situation. I would really enjoy reading a second chapter to see if the relationship develops. Thank you. I have enjoyed your stories for years.

I miss a reciprocation

That moment when things might happen, the hoping, and then the sudden rush to fruition. Sweet.

It maybe short but it is quality writing

So, I thought I’d read this as a personal reading exercise to advance my own writing struggles. After reading your posts in the authors hangout, i thought let’s see how the great n good write, I didn’t expect to get any enjoyment.

How wrong was I!

Throughly enjoyable tale with great buildup and just enough oohlala.

Loved the story

Looking from afar to her 1st time...

Excellent. Can’t wait for the next story.

Not my cup of tea. However, it's beautifully done, but cries for MORE.

Absolutely Perfect.

This is a wonderful story. The slow build and interaction was perfect.

Thank you for sharing,