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beautiful
haunting, and melancholy.
Nice work
: )
Almost the flavor of turn-of-century melancholy.
At the same time, it was the "Invasion of the Semi-colons!". I found myself bouncing between two headsets... one was content with the Sunday School parable feel.... and one wanted to "hear" the poem from the flower.
A pleasant quandary.
:)
you had me almost feeling sad for the tulip, but why should I? she is a beauty, on her own, you portrayed this very well,
only thing I see, besides the semi-colons popping out, shouldnt "love struck" have a hyphen, perhaps?
You know...
I love tulips.. so much more understated than most flowers. The poem does an admiraible job of reaching for that, but just misses by being a little preachy. (Just a tiny, tiny bit) It's still a lovely poem though.
You know...
I love tulips.. so much more understated than most flowers. The poem does an admiraible job of reaching for that, but just misses by being a little preachy. (Just a tiny, tiny bit) It's still a lovely poem though.
:-)
Remember the pink tulip,
long after her story is told.
She has hope, forbearance and pride;
yet, remains unaffected
by the sorrows of her youth;
the sting of rejection;
the shallowness of ignorance. -These last lines were excellent. The entire poems was, but what a great ending!
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A beautifully sweet piece
To be savored and enjoyed on
Every reading.
blooms
A flower among flowers that somehow desires to persevere to take her rightful place. Something very beautiful about this rendering. Rich images abound!
Thankful reminder
I write stories about nasty sex. Sometimes I forget what tender and beautiful can be...Loved your poem
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