All Comments on 'Halloween Angel'

I meant Tale~ I enjoyed your story, A touching tale... (~_*) good luck and Happy Halloween...

I loved your story. Must have been based on something real? So nice to read that even a man of God could have feelings of love for a woman. And extra nice that he let himself experience the depths of her love and did not let the poor thing pine forever to feel broken hearted and unwanted.

Seemed way too easy for them to just do it like that. Where's the emotion, the guilt, the forbidden? Could be a good tale if more time was taken to develop the characters and their situation.

Ummm, a little arithmetic shows you are writing about a 37-year old virgin?

Nice story, but that was a bit too unbelievable.

Good luck though.

I think this story would have been infinitely better with more character development. Otherwise, it reads like quick sex without a purpose. Yes, longer stories take more time to write, but I think the investment would have been well taken here. Good luck!