All Comments on 'Moonlit Meal'

You held this reader's interest and developed a feeling of belonging in your character approch. Keep the style going.

Descriptive, indepth, alluring, excellent tale thanks for the read and good luck (~_*) and Happy Halloween~

Should have been longer. It jumped right into the sex too abruptly. More build-up, more about the characters, would be good.

Beautifully written. Stunning descriptions. Very nice job.

Beautiful descriptions. I liked your story a lot. Especially the nice surprise at the end. LOL

Good luck.

The detailed sex writing was pretty amazing.... a little quick, and many background details about the characters are missing. So, the reader has to use his imagination, but I bet you planned that. Good luck!

I loved your story. It was a bit rushed though, but the descriptive writting made up for it. I'd love to read more of these kinds of works from you.

A very good story with an interesting twist. It's not everyday that a vampire and a werewolf meet without killing each other. Looking forward to Chapter 2.

Don't you dare stop here! Where is the next chapter and the one (s) after that