All Comments on 'Halloween Damsel in Distress'

Fun tale but no romance. Not sure what to call your tale. Almost made the

cheater class . I think it could be the start of a cheater tale.

I liked your story and your writing style! Keep up the good work!

wrong category should be "Loving Wives" two scum of the earth cheaters. I hope the spouses find out and leave them both broke and on the street...

I enjoyed the build and the play between the characters would like to see a second chapter

Is it just me, or did them letting their young children run along without them, while they went upstairs to have their adulterous game, distract from reading the story? The whole time, I kept wondering about the young'ns.

Where's the next episode?