by SIR_PERRY44
I myself think that you have this in the wrong catagory, it should be in the BDSM.
But the writing is ok and there is a plot
Loved the first chapter and the second is even better. The buildup is great and cannot wait for the next chapter. Can't wait to see what a lovely little slave nikki will become.
Excellent beginning.....I don't mind the ocassional man in there, as long as the slut is being forced to perform. Can't wait to see more :)
Off to a great start......hope to read more of her training soon.
Great story with a bit of an edge.... I would love to see more from Nikki.