All Comments on 'Little Viking Gives Up Control'

Hope to hear of his real punishment!!

Thank you for this story. Please continue.

Thanks for reading. I was inspired to write this story mainly because of the first part, which is based on reality. Teased and excited online with no outlet.. Hopefully I'll get some more "inspiration". Maybe even the chance to write some non-fiction in the next one :p (I wish..).

Anyway, it's my first story and I hope it was readable and somewhat enjoyable. Constructive criticism is welcome.