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by Anonymous

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by My Erotic Tail10/11/04

A Heavenly Tale~

Another great tale for trick or treating readers... Good Luck Og~ (*_*) HAPPY HAALOWEEN

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by sack10/17/04

the erotic part could be longer....

Since you are so gifted, why not give the readers what they want and outline a long, throbbing hot sex scene at the end? the ultimate sentence just encourages unibombers! Good luck, Sack

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by Boxlicker10110/18/04

a fun read

It was interesting and a fun read. As Sack said, the erotic part could have been longer but that is just my preference and doesn't have to be yours. I can't help thinking that Alan should have been able to recognize Louise or not from her voice, mannerisms or the way her body felt against him. Maybe not a certainty but close to it.

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by Rumple Foreskin10/18/04

So much for Monkish celibacy

Seems like you're starting to get into the habit, so to speak, of ecclesiastical erotica. That's a good thing.

Rumple

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by Black Tulip10/19/04

Cloistered

Cloistered gets a whole new meaning.
Not terribly erotic, but definitely an amusing story.
I liked it.

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by Colleen Thomas10/24/04

Costumes

Costumed protags seem to be your idiom og :)

Fun story.

-Colly

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