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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Interesting Point of View

For a second I was afraid it was the hamster narrating.

jmbasquiat_fanjmbasquiat_fanover 19 years agoAuthor
Author amusement!

Heeeheeeheeeheee! OMG! That hamster comment is so funny and cute! I'm fairly certain that the real-life Fat Louie would be too obsessed with Cheerios or his chew toys to ever watch anyone in the shower!

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailover 19 years ago
Cute~

From cute to erotic to tense then romance, wow what a ride, thanks...Good Luck (*_~) Happy Halloween

sacksackover 19 years ago
very original

Certainly unique, you might have wanted to give the Thugs names instead of numbers, that was a little awkward. Also, be careful about using too many hyphens...this story was infected with them, and it appeared more amateurish because of that. Good luck!

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Cisgender female, she/her pronouns. In an open poly relationship with a male partner currently. And since they won't give me the option in the pets section, I have a sonbun (pet boy rabbit).