All Comments on 'The Accident Ch. 01'

Very nice start chapter 2 soon

Ch. 2 plz

Please write another chapter

Could use a bit more fleshing out. Almost like an outline that only got three quarter finished. Keep going, you'll get it.

Now to see if it works on others. Maybe get into the Minds of the Trucking Company's Lawyer. Along with other Hosp. Staff.

Not just a novel concept; the depiction of the survivor guilt is poignant and harrowing.

Fair start. But I'm not going to enjoy it very much without some better character development and romance. Chapter 4 popped up during a tag search, but I always start at the beginning. I hope that you don't disappoint me. 3/5

This is gonna be fun. He doesnt seem to be an asshole where he doesn’t care if they lose their job or their family so that a good thing. As far as taking advantage of a nurse in that situation, I don’t condone it but I understand it. I was in the hospital and saw the cutest doctor who was also one of the nicest people I have ever met and after being in their for awhile, I could understand having him give me a good going over since my boyfriend would never know and I needed it bad considering how wet I was constantly.