All Comments on 'Virgin Sacrifice'

Story was very erotic and hot, and I would have given 5 stars, but you lost me at the end. A little too unbelievable.

What the???? The ending

Personally I LOVE the ending. Without it I don't think this tale would live up to being erotic HORROR. It would just be a sexy magical fantasy story and would lack punch.

Loved the tongue and cheek humor....and the fact that you never know how it was going to end!

I didn't think the young man was going to make it out unscathed, and the author didn't disappoint. Good short story.

I was surprised to spot a couple typos, given this author's usual high standards, but I would imagine the contest deadline probably had something to do with that.

I actually liked the female character's sense of humor throughout, and it helped me overcome my dislike of femdom stories.

5 stars

This was a very hot, well-written story that used old myth without the tropes used by commercial film-makers and potboiler writers for the last fifty years.

My kudos to the author. Well done!!!