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All Comments on 'Late October's Dream'
by chris_r_uk
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sackover 19 years agotoo short
While there is something to be said for a short, concise story, this one needs more explanation of what is going on. More sex, more eroticism, more painting of moods. Good luck anyway.
Anonymousover 19 years agoNeeded more
More buildup, more something. And what did it have to do with Halloween? Could have just been at any con.
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