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Late October's Dream

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by sack10/17/04

too short

While there is something to be said for a short, concise story, this one needs more explanation of what is going on. More sex, more eroticism, more painting of moods. Good luck anyway.

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by Anonymous10/22/04

Needed more

More buildup, more something. And what did it have to do with Halloween? Could have just been at any con.

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