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The Masquerade

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by sack10/17/04

Have you ever seen the movie John and Mary?

This reminds me of the movie John and Mary....if the characters had been less anonymous, I think I would have related to them better. Good luck!

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by Anonymous10/22/04

Nice writing

Wish the characters hadn't been so vague; I like to know who I'm reading about.

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by shortncurvy10/27/04

REALLY nice

this is the best story i've read in awhile. that i didn't know the characters did not matter in the least to me; on the contrary, it's part of the mystery! sensuous, eloquent, and romantic, with a bit of naughtiness--it's what a great erotic story should be.

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