All Comments on 'All in Good Time'

by wildaraven1313

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Ok, but "a great set of legs"? Just how many legs does she have? Next time, use "pair or just mention legs. Other proofing needed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Loss of Innocence

You lost me when you wrote “did this things called fucking”

Good grief; even proof reading can’t improve bad writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Huh?

She was grabbing for his cock but then called 911?

You make it sound like she was going to cry rape after not even saying no - and pursuing it herself.

Not cool.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
enjoyed it

I love you wildaraven..lol ;-)

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