All Comments on 'Rocky Raccoon'

Thanks for this and all of your stories...looking forward to more of the Rocky adventures.

Thank you

Hooked. Keep them coming. A great storyline is building here.

A well rounded story. Not too much sex but enough. Am going to look forward to the next 30 chapters whenever they arrive.

harder yet to build a hierarchy, TK U MLJ LV NV

thanks for participating. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

Had some difficulties in making sense of chronological order, otherwise it was excellent entertainment. Would love to read sequels.

Best wishes, Simon

How ever long it takes I will be reading this story.

I'll be following this one. Nicely written.

Shit...absolutely no willpower. Knew I should have waited to start this one.....now I have to relive the nightmare of DQS's WWWM daily checks for updates :) Can't wait for the next chapters though.

I had to tease you, Mr. Qhml1.

Glad to know your ticker is still wound up, young man. *LoL* If you need an editor, feel free to drop me a line. Info is in my profile or look me up on that FaceBook dohickey.

~Uncle Bozzin

If someone isn't whipping their eyes they are wiping utensils out because no one proofreads.

Native Americans, Gold Rush, Railroad, Ranching, Cattle, spuds, this could go anywhere. Lead On.

Great beginning. I look forward to reading the installments forum as long as you will write them. Your fan, Randi

As long as you keep writing your stories I'll keep reading them. Happy Thanksgiving

I’m not a western fan, but loving this.

More. Lots more, please.

I'm looking forward to where this one goes!

Another fine story by qhml1.

Rocky is an interesting character. Has many adventures.

No wife or serious girlfriend. He also didn't mention his family back east. No letters to them or the sister he was so close to, Helga.

On the other hand, a lot of information about minor characters , Darby his father, Giovanni last survivor of a mafia, Vivian the rescue, the Indian chief and wife he adopts as parents. I enjoy a complex plot with many characters.

Gave you 4*s. I look forward to the next chapter qhml1.

Thank you.

AMerryman

Definitely a five-star story. Looking forward to your other chapters. Just wondering why Rocky didn't stay with the Widow Robinson, she would have been a heck of a wife. Thank you for this one Q.

Looking forward to more!

qhml1 There just has to be many many more tales to be born from this very well put together story. Randi did really good to ensure you put together a western tale that has to be only a start and we all thank her for asking you to put it down and publish it.

5* + Very graphic writing skill that painted pictures in my mind as I read the story of this Rocky story. More please: Iceman

Page 1 sex scene between Liam and Helga is actually Darby and Heidi. Needs editing.

Great story, loved it

MCPO Jim

Thoroughly enjoyed chapter 1, will patiently wait for the rest of the story. You are definitely one of the "legends"!!!!

part 2 is needed

I don't accept your declaration of how long it will take to complete this story ... I request, nay demand the next instalment NOW!!

Too much? Ahh fuck it Ill wait then.

Thanks for a good story - waiting impatiently for the next instalment.

Take all the time you need, I cannot wait to see how you develop this story. Please keep the storyline realistic, thanks again

Perty damn good....

5ssss......all day long

bill

I enjoyed the story so far, but I'm a bit lost as to the order of events. I would have liked some pointers in the story to let me know what was before what. Otherwise a good read.

So far so good.

I got a bit confused a couple times, but who cares. I usually don't read this kind of story, here or anywhere else, but this is good.

You sir are a great story teller and have kept my interest during the entire telling so far and I suspect through the entire story! Thank You 5*

Not edited properly, as usual.

Too many spelling mistakes, as usual

Too many grammatical mistakes, as usual

Too many jumps in subject and timeline.

Easy to point out others' errors, isn't it, Druss? I look forward to your first story submission so that everyone may see how it can be properly done. However, until such time as we are able to critique your work, perhaps constructive suggestions would be more appropriate.

Chur bro awesome story

Very seldom does a long story like this capture my interest enough to keep reading. This is an exception which kept me interested from start to finish. A very unique work that is pretty darn believable. The few minor typos took nothing away from the story, IMO. I'm off to part two...thanks for the gift you gave us.

You start out with a cool story about a dude fighting Indians and saving one and so forth and then did Segway into to the bullshit of where he came from tell one of the other the Indian story was cool. The other story sucked

Love your stories. a point the 7th. cavalry was not assign this region during the time period. of this chapter.

So far so good, interesting setup though.

Excellent story!

We only know the author by his handle, but I must say that this is exceptionally fine writing, far better than most popular fiction. qhml1 has genuine talent and, as a reader, I thank him for this creative, well executed story.

One hell of a story, with a bit of everything. The backstory you gave us was simply amazing and i can't wait to start reading part two.

Great story so far! Took me by surprise when it went from him dozing on a train dreaming of Nancy, to suddenly back to the early part where he's on the Llano Estacado looking for the guy that stole his wife (I guess that'll be Nancy?)

It wouldn't have been a surprise if I'd been reading this excellent story all in one go, but dammit real life has me up and down reading in my spare time. Oh yeah, and trying to write a little here and there, then shaking my head as I realize what I put down is no where near as good as this.

Great beginning. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Hooked

Louis L'Amour novel. Very nice.

ltpw

Just re-read it, because I needed to get back up to speed for the new Chapter 3. I do so enjoy your stories and wish you wrote more. I'd certainly buy books if you published.

Already scored 5*... still 5 as I have re-read it. Thanks so much for the entertainment.

Last story for me to read - off to a great start!

That you are an excellent story teller is true - it is also true that this is not very erotic - you passed over any number of opportunities to develop and explore coming of age relationships with this young stud - I will give you one more chapter but I come here to read about erotica not how the west was won.

Lots of background and information hopefully building up the characters for the next chapter.

good story lots of detail in the description of the old west.

Good start. Not really a LW story so far.

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An Indian named “Long Horse” and his wife is named “Swallow”??

Roflmao!! Lolololololol....

Great work!

I am gonna love this story!

Good beginning. I'm reading the rest of it.

THANKS

If his father sweet talked his mother into having four children,how come he had three brothers and a sister?.

Another good story you’ve written. Difficult times for all and better times for some who were decent and hard working. Well done! Finn

Sounds and looks interesting. But there are still holes. For instance, the last paragraph. He is going by train to see a potential bride in Georgia and he is with Doe Eyes, making love. Is this just a dream? Where is the timeline? Where is the logic?

5*

BJ

Okay, I’m confused. I thought HER name was McGill, but she called herself Lil. And everyone knew her as Nancy. But now his name is Rocky McGill and….yeah, I’m confused. But it’s a good read, I look forward to the next chapter.

Why didn't he stay with Viv if he wanted to be a farmer?..Also confusing as to where he is,if he is with Doe Eyes,how can he have ben farming with O' Shea?.

A very long-winded story. It took me a while to figure out when you were in the present and when you were doing a flashback. 4*

I read more to this story then the 6 chapters,I know it but I can not find the rest\. If anyone knows where I can find itplease send me where. I do not like to give out my email bhut for this I will and hope I will not regret it. bell@gorge.net

Hey Anymouse!

If your screen is a tad narrow, scroll to the right and up just a hair. You’ll see Rocky Racoon Ch 02. Finger or mouse that title and voile! Or! Scroll up a tad past the star rating. Tap on qhml1 and it’ll take you to a list of all of Q’s work. Rocky is way down there.

Which begs the question: Q is a prolific writer. Spends a LOT a time writing. Probably late at night. His stories are here on Literotica. So how does he have time to “research” the sex part? Hmmm…. Then again, I’m reading them late at night, SO I have no room to say much.

Ok, fridge, RC coke, and a Moon Pie with a few squirts of chocolate syrup. The ultimate in a redneck sugar rush…. Now back to da movie…

An excellent story in spite of the confusion with past events.

Reading the comments proves beyond a doubt that readers here just skim rather than read. The flashbacks are clearly indicated which begs the question how can you Nitpic when you don’t actually read the story.

I agree, many need reading skills - desperately! Thank you for yet another tale (my second read) Q. 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

So far, Rocky is luckier than he deserves to be. He cant shit w/o finding silver if not gold. Fun read.rk