by ZachDocEight
Some quality writing but it ended too ubruptly without enough build up.
As a rare book librarian, I can tell you that this is, you know, not how rare book libraries work. I was all excited to see a story that included us, but couldn't get past the first paragraph. Alas!
I agree with Anonymous "huh". I read the first paragraph, was deeply disappointed by the writing, and skimmed to the end to see if it got any better. Nope. The writing was juvenile, the description base, and as a woman, frankly insulting. Next time, don't write from the woman's perspective if, in fact, you have no experience with women.
Don't knock it till you try it sister! Some of us are sluts that love pain, some are sluts that love getting backdoored, some of us love getting spanked within an inch of our lives and then getting rammed in our puss till we cum. Please writer, continue for some of us fantisize about each one of these!!