All Comments on 'Dumb Little Author Girly'

by Phoenix Arrow

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Love your work!

You're the best! I came FOUR times!!! The thinking woman's porn. The kind that makes you wet without even touching yourself. You write good humiliation stories. You're not dumb freaking bimbo. Your fingers are not more useful up your ass than on the keyboard!

I highlight your words as I jack myself off, just so I can point it out like an asshole in my public comment!!!

You're such a fantastic writer! You make my cock hard like hell, My pussy was abuzz with your words, You can spell 'shit'!

Don't take your sex stories back to your elementary school teacher to have them proof read! You're a Smart Writer!

Hey nice ass! Good thumb warmers!

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Hey, PA.

Superb stuff, this.

100% pure fun read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Not your usual

Not yor usual but I love everything you've written.

flinchny010flinchny010over 19 years ago
Great story!

Great concept, great execution! You found an illuminating angle on the whole infantilization / humiliation / submission thang. Loved it!

Sir_NathanSir_Nathanover 19 years ago
I thought it was pretty good too..

Laughed my ass off at myself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Good on yer

You done reel good just like what you allways did.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Keep coming back...

I have to say that this is truly one of my favorite stories and whenever I'm feeling a little out of sorts, I always have to pop on and read it... Thank you for making me cry in a happy way! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Cant believe I wasted my time with this

You have got to be the dumbest little filth writer on this site. You can't have over a third grade education.

You should go get tested because you might be able to get assistance from the government. I read that if you are a functional retard you could have someone come and hold your hand through your daily activities, and you must surely qualify. Your brain must bounce around in your head like a peanut in a boxcar. I can't believe you even figured out how to work a keyboard, you're so stupid.

(Hows that PA? You like comments like that? :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Can't believe I wasted my time 2

Of course I am just playing along.

This was a great story

Nice job

Mandy01Mandy01about 13 years ago
Why didn't I think of that?

Prolly cause I’m not into self humiliation like this author girlie. Pity that, since my last submission would have put me in heaven with all the criticism it copped.

Loved the story and got off so much I didn’t have enough grey cells to see if there were any mistakes in this story. Lol

I’ll see if I can turn my next abortion around with a little rubbing of my own while I read the comments, you never know till you try, right?

Full marks one this one so no orgasm for you Mr Arrow

Amanda

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
my view

personally i dont care how you spell as long as its hot-and boy is it hot-i love those cheerleader stories -especially the parts about mrs. lowenstein-btw f a spell checker-just keep writing & i'll keep reading

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
nice work

i do like a funny, clever sex story

with a little bit of humiliation and bumming,

thanks :)

rondell347rondell347almost 9 years ago
Meanie ....

Loved it "Funk" really stood out, should have further use in stories.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Amazing

Write more!

DivorcedmomAjaDivorcedmomAja11 months ago

God this story maybe old. But it was so hot

slider7373slider73738 months ago

fabulous ❤️

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