homeMind ControlYour Surprise EncounterPublic Comments

All Comments  for

Your Surprise Encounter

byincharge©
All
Comments (4)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/20/04

Needs proofreading.

I also find 1st and 2nd person stories very hard to read. Better to put it all in 3rd person. More importantly though, get someone to proofread for typos and spelling mistakes.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous02/03/05

Spell Check!!

This would be a good story if it was corrected

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by SkarlittFeenicks06/08/09

super hot

I thought your story was super hot. Very good job, I was so caught up and transfixed. Great work.
Sincerely,
Skarlitt

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous11/05/13

Female

Clearly written by a sex-starved man who only wishes this could happen to him.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Your Surprise Encounter  or
More submissions by incharge.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel