This is one of the most well written short stories I had ever read. The mysterious and thrilling way it started is meant to grab your attention and never let it go. The erotic and incredibly sensual way it explores a truly bold and scorching fantasy is simply masterfully develop with just the perfect pace, managing to keep all the erotic impact to let the reader breathless with a stylish and graceful way of writing you can't help but admire! And then you will be amaze with the perfect ending of this story. Big Congrats for let us know you can explore strong sexual fantasy with such a great taste.
Why Wildcat, you teasing tart! This is like one of those Rollercoaster rides that go straight down and then twist and turn, totally "devilish" to the very end! Try your hand at my contest entry Who Killed Lois Laynes? (in the New section)...I bet you'll solve it! Good luck, Sack
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Anonymous10/22/04
Well written
and yet somehow curiously detached ... especially at the beginning, where was her reaction?
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Anonymous10/29/04
Very well writen
Wildcat I have enjoyed all of your stories and this one was excellent as well. You write with a dark tone that sends the senses into overdrive. Your use of description and pacing pulls the reader in and the plot holds them there in a delightful, yet clawed fist. Thank you for letting me see a glimpse of that beautiful imagination of yours. Vince
English
A perfect Holloween Treat!
This is one of the most well written short stories I had ever read. The mysterious and thrilling way it started is meant to grab your attention and never let it go. The erotic and incredibly sensual way it explores a truly bold and scorching fantasy is simply masterfully develop with just the perfect pace, managing to keep all the erotic impact to let the reader breathless with a stylish and graceful way of writing you can't help but admire! And then you will be amaze with the perfect ending of this story. Big Congrats for let us know you can explore strong sexual fantasy with such a great taste.
Rocio Rosado
devilishly good!
Very nicely done. Poor lucky Sheila.
delightfully naughty
Why Wildcat, you teasing tart! This is like one of those Rollercoaster rides that go straight down and then twist and turn, totally "devilish" to the very end! Try your hand at my contest entry Who Killed Lois Laynes? (in the New section)...I bet you'll solve it! Good luck, Sack
Well written
and yet somehow curiously detached ... especially at the beginning, where was her reaction?
Very well writen
Wildcat I have enjoyed all of your stories and this one was excellent as well. You write with a dark tone that sends the senses into overdrive. Your use of description and pacing pulls the reader in and the plot holds them there in a delightful, yet clawed fist. Thank you for letting me see a glimpse of that beautiful imagination of yours. Vince
Turn on the a/c please! It is hot in here...
One of the best All Hallow's Eve stories that I ever read. Hope to read more from you soon! Erotic and horrific, excellent read.
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