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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/17/04

tender

tender, different and cute. I liked it.

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by sack10/18/04

Could you take this further.....

I think it might be interesting to write about what erotic things might happen AFTER the new shoes are tried on. As it stands now, the story is basically "man ruins shoes, man buys shoes". Not nearly as interesting as an erotic encounter between the two participants. Good start, though!

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