All Comments on 'Like Lovers Do Ch. 02'

I'm not the biggest fan of lovers fallout but this one did peak my interest, sure Ethan pulled a dick move in dumping his GF so fast and for spilling all the beans but it had to be done sooner or later. Rachel menwhile takes this as (I imagine) every woman wood and reacts accordingly. Not exactly what I envisoned for the 2nd chapter but it sure does good job at mirroring real life even if it gets messy.

4* again but going strong.

Keep at it sweetheart, i hope this encourages you to keep writing. About all i would suggest ar this point is to post longer parts, try for at least 2 pages worth each time.

Loved the 2nd chapter, and I can't wait to read what come's next...

I am irate at how Rachel has handed her end...not listening to her VMs or answering her text, plus she should've had 'coffee' with Rick already.

Thank you for stopping by and all your kind words. I realize these are short chapters, however, as the story evolves they will become longer. As for Rachel's attitude towards the situation, her 'avoidance' is a coping mechanism inherent to her character (persona). Being a psychologist doesn't make you perfect, or in absolute control of your emotions, but it's a super valid comment!