All Comments on 'Damion's Release'

Pengoddess, I enjoyed this one. I like to read of big black men fucking white girls.

You write it very well, but I think that 'Literotica' have messed up with your grammar. Why is there ? instead of ' all the time? Ask for it to be resubmitted and printed correctly. I can tell by your writing excellence that it must have been correct, and that it is their error not yours. But anyway, it is a hot story and I hope to see more from you.

- a cum hungry lady from Sweden

Nice work, I love the sound of Damion xxxxx

Pleeeeease make the chapters longer. This is too good. Fun fun fun read.

Really turned me on, Can you say it's gettin hot in here????Keep up the good work.

The pacing and descriptive language are well done and I look forward to seeing more of your work, although "Damion" was almost a direct, feature for feature copy of actor Michael Clarke Duncan, star of THE GREEN MILE and other films. Inspiration, I suppose, is wherever you can find it, though if his dick IS pierced I wont ask how you know... :)