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All Comments on 'Matthew's Choice - A Halloween Story'

by The_Technician

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

The ol' switcheroo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Too short characters are underdeveloped and actual dialogue nonexistent

Your other works are so much better

Nemo18Nemo18over 6 years ago
Liked the plot twist

The characters did feel underdeveloped however and the plot moved really fast

B_BaileyB_Baileyover 6 years ago
Well written

Thank you. I enjoyed reading something out of the ordinary for me. Short, to the point and still had a somewhat happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
just missing

First of I admire the hell out of someone who will publish. I never will flame someone. I was missing the puzzle of how the demon and not the angel. It is given in the post but I was looking for its development.

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...