All Comments on 'The Accident Ch. 02'

Coming with no touch is jumping the shark. You lost credibility which is vital for fantasy like this.

Clearly Mr.anonymous must nvr been with a women cause it actually is possible for a women to be so turned on she can cum without being touched

male to have an unassisted orgasm - V.O.E.

Good story! I look forward to reading more chapters! However, you may want to give them a second or third read through before posting just to catch some of the minor grammatical errors.

But shouldn't he Program Jenny to locate others she would feel are worthy of being his. I mean he has control over the Women he meets so why not Create a Selected Harem.

Why is it that every MC story has the main character creating a harem? Seriously, that is a fuck ton of drama no guy wants or needs. And controlling them into living fuck dolls is boring because it isnt just the catch, its the chase that is important for men.

Put simply, i can fuck my wife twice a day if i wanted to; but i have neither the time or the inclination. Most guys dont.

Likewise, simply making every female unable to resist will get boring.

The story has potential but it is too easy, like a video game where you have the cheat codes programmed in...after awhile, you won't play it because its predictable.

Having only two women in this chapter and their names being so similar when reading them (Jean, Jenny), it was hard to remember who was who when they were all in the same scene.

"Put simply, I can fuck my wife twice a day if I wanted to; but I have neither the time or the inclination. Most guys don't. "

Please only speak for yourself.

Holy shit. If only my wife let me do it that much. I'm 31 and quite surprised you say you don't want to. Hopefully, you still satisfy her at least, sheesh.

Also, keep up the good work! Enjoying the story. :)

Yeah, it's like watching you walk a tight rope stumbling. Any second now you're going to fall off and I'll move on to another story. Mind control should be used for the greater good. It's okay to reap the rewards, but at the same time avoid taking undue advantage. Don't abuse the gift. Jenny came about her attraction naturally, so encourage and build on that. But I'm afraid that nonconcent is going to raise its ugly face all too soon. 3/5