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by lostandfounder10/15/04

A good poem...

about being tired. Conveys futility quite well in the gray statement like quality of it. Personally, I think a little more emotion would have made it a more interesting read, but for what it is saying it works well.

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by jd4george10/15/04

More from the heart...

...and less from the mind, would have made this a more satisfying read for me. So, chalk me up as chiming in with Lostandfounder.

A nice poem that can be a good poem.

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