All Comments on 'My Hot College Roommate'

by kerryp

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gnome_mangnome_manover 6 years ago
So Very, Very Hot

This was an amazing first effort. You did very, very well and I have to say that I haven't read many stories to match it. In this short little story, you have created two very real, very sexy girls.

Really, really well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
excellent

Very beautiful.

blondsublesblondsublesover 6 years ago
My favorite type of story!

Very well done! Hopefully, you will continue this. :D <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Thank you!

Thank you for sharing your amazing story. So very well written, you captured the intensity perfectly! I can't wait to read more of your work!

ImNIndyImNIndyover 6 years ago
Felt like I was there.

Welcome, glad you're sharing here. You drew me in as if I was there in the room with them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
wow

so good

i touched myself

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very Believable

This sorry is very sensitive with regard to how people make the bridge from friendship to sex, with the sex being very hot.

Please continue to write!

LionsGirlLionsGirlover 6 years ago
So sexy

Your story is so sweet and sexy. I felt like I was there!! Amazing.

stroudlestroudleover 6 years ago
sweet

that was sweet and sexy

well written please continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very good.

Well crafted story. I would like to read more stories written by you.

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Meover 6 years ago

This was a very good story. I would love a chapter two. Pretty please.

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