by kerryp
This was an amazing first effort. You did very, very well and I have to say that I haven't read many stories to match it. In this short little story, you have created two very real, very sexy girls.
Really, really well done.
Very well done! Hopefully, you will continue this. :D <3
Thank you for sharing your amazing story. So very well written, you captured the intensity perfectly! I can't wait to read more of your work!
Welcome, glad you're sharing here. You drew me in as if I was there in the room with them.
This sorry is very sensitive with regard to how people make the bridge from friendship to sex, with the sex being very hot.
Please continue to write!
Well crafted story. I would like to read more stories written by you.