All Comments on 'Bargain with a Devil'

Nice work! You did a great job managing the tone of the story and making it hot enough to be interesting. I really enjoyed this!

Great way to start the week

Great little story .Loved the ending .

Loved the "fooled you Daddy" part of the story......hope you keep writting

You really pulled the tale (and tail) along. How about a prequel with the girls having fun and plotting this?

The only thing that would've made it better was if whomever rang the doorbell (sent by daddy who knew it was all a set up), let himself in, came upstairs and took "Rixhi" away to let "Daddy" and Meghan be alone. Why do so many of these stories have to include a friend who interferes with the Daddy/daughter aspect?

OMG this was great. I was skeptical at first but DAMN the ending was incredible. Like the others so dearly want to read more! Thanksgiving Christmas and New Years are approaching.............

loved this little incest tale,,great twist,,well done,,best of your writings so far..

You wrote Valentine's Interrupted. Fuck you. Cunt

I loved this story, so freaking sexy!!! I need more father/Daughter stories from you please!

I loved the whole build up and reveal ! Great job !

I didn't like the reveal. Only in the pages of literotica do children so willingly seduce their parents. It was a sexy story, but in my opinion you should have stuck with the magic. At least with the unreality of "magic," the end result would have been more realistic. Still, that's simply (my) opinion. It's a well written story.

There always has to be a manipulative bitch (friend) doesn't there?

I actually did see that one coming . . . .