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Blow Job Bet

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by Ruttweiler11/06/17

I voted five stars

Four for the story and one extra to balance the morons who write things like “pathetic cuck shit”.

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by c24j11/06/17

Dang it . . . good but I want just a touch more revenge.

I would have asked the wives . . . okay, tell your husbands you had to give me a blow job to try and keep me and Cathy together. NEVER tell them it didn't happen. Just tell them it was the only thing I'd accept to get even for their restraining me. Tell them it's only a blow job.
Find some way to make Mark's life miserable for a while.

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by Anonymous11/09/17

not enough

Fine Mark got tuned up, but what about three guys who restrained him and were going to make him watch?

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by Anonymous11/10/17

Oh please!

You're going to kiss and tongue that same mouth and suck off Mark by proxy? Hell no. Big Guy you make me wonder if you're a closet creampie aficionado.

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by Anonymous11/11/17

Shitty cuckold/wimp crap!!!

That author is realy into cuckold/wimp fantasy!!!

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by Anonymous11/11/17

It wasn't bad writing

But I couldn't stomach the cuckiness. She gave another man a blow job while other men stopped her husband from interfearing and while he was begging her not to. What kind of useless person would trust someone who treated them so shabbily.

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by ErotFan11/27/17

@c24j

I like your thinking!
P.S. Good flash story, BigGuy... many stars.

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by Schwanze112/09/17

Pain

retribution and ruination. Killing is too good for the bastards who did this to him.

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by FD4512/09/17

The fight should have left him sooner

As soon as she choose to honor that bet past his protests, that would have done it for me.

My suspension of disbelief got sort of twisted up in this one. On the one hand not one wife, husband, onlooker or even Mark had the foresight that God gave a guppy. "Do I really want to get blown by the wife of this guy who looks like I am a walking dead man?"

That being said, 'key parties' used to be a 'thing' in the Sixties, so I guess it is possible that all of them got lost in the moment.

***

I am always entertained by these guys who go on about 'cock sucker by proxy' at kissing a woman who gave out a blow job. Were their women oral virgins? Wanna bet? So what is the half life of cock sucking to make her mouth 'kissable' again?

Does that mean when they kiss their sweeties who suck them off, they are sucking their own cocks? Seems like an excuse to be outraged.

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by Pappy712/18/17

I agree with the comment

about the guys that held his arms. I would have crippled them just as soon as I could. And I still think that this thing had gone on before she was married to the current husband. The level of non-verbal communication was just too great.

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by Schwanze101/13/18

HarryinVA October

Exactly. Said much better than I did.

Seems Biguy is all about poking the bear.

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by CaOldDog01/22/18

Great story

Full 5* marks for a story that makes sense and is told with the thoughts of "real people".

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by Anonymous01/23/18

Huecuck says "schwanze" is Swahili for

"cuck in a closet"

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by Schwanze101/28/18

Schwanze1

says anon critics are, by definition, pussies.

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by Schwanze102/02/18

JKMJJ

Oh HELL yes. Best comment yet.

And a big fuck you to the author for writing this turd.

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by weathermanks02/06/18

Thanks

Thanks for the good ending. I was wondering how you'd end it.

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by Anonymous02/12/18

Another fucked up ending

Why would he take her back? Sure, maybe she's stopped gambling. But that's until the next "sure thing" comes along. And why didn't he expose his ex-wife's actions and the actions of all their friends to EVERYONE?? What would Alison and Mary's friends and family think about things? And then to take her back? What are they? Richard Burton and Elizabeth Taylor for freaking sakes? Once again, an awful ending. Have you been reading MM stories and recycling his wimp husbands????

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by Anonymous02/12/18

I Talked To A Lawyer Friend

I explained the circumstances of this story to him. He said the three men who held the husband could be charged with unlawful restraint. Marc, Cathy and the two wives could be charged as accessories. Seven people could be facing stiff fines, if not time in jail. Then the husband could file Alienation of Affection petitions against Marc, the three husbands and the two wives. That's some heavy consequences so that Marc can get a blowjob. I find it odd that the card games evaporated when just one player, Cathy, quit attending. That puts the intent of the games in question.

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by danoctober02/13/18

Very interesting.

Well written. But I could imagine the husband seeking revenge on everyone . Ugly evil revenge. Lot's of bodies to get rid of revenge. No mercy.
*****

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by sbrooks103x02/15/18

This Is a Partial Repeat, But...

Even for a silly-ass story, there needs to be some internal logic, and refusing to take cash to settle a bet isn't welching on the bet. The blow job represented a certain amount of money, and as long as that money was paid, then the bet was honored.

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by Anonymous02/22/18

Never said

Wife admitted she was wrong finally but never apologized or said she was sorry.

anon.1

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by Anonymous03/08/18

no excuses

Can't believe you have bim take ber back. Everything he said and felt was true. And ALL the people in tbat room need the same physical lain Mark received.

As ended thjs is stupid.

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by desertdog4303/15/18

Mark got beat up.

How bout the 3 bastards who held him against his will ? THUMP THUMP THUMP...

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by danoctober03/21/18

I would love to do a follow up.

All those involved would one by one suffer in the most horrible twisted ways.

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by Ezrollin05/23/18

An entertaining story but...

He can blame Mark and the three guys holding him but it was the wife giving the blow job. Would I have gone after them one by one later...maybe but it wouldn't have changed the facts...if you're that wrong about what her values were when you married her what makes you think you're any better at judging them now?

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by Anonymous05/23/18

What’s amazing to me is.....

The commenters miss the whole point. Was this a good and well told story? Yes it was! This wasn’t a retelling of actual events, prompting the characters, invented in the mind of the author, to take this or that action. It’s a story, damn it. All praise to the author for a well done effort.

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by danoctober05/29/18

Hmmm...

This a great story up until he decides to reconcile. That part was a bit hard to understand, but it did give an idea for a different type of response. Still a great story.

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by BarbieKen06/06/18

Actually, a nice told story.

It took me a while while reading it to actually grasp the story. It was well told and I could get a real feeling for it. Thanks

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by timriv06/08/18

Have to agree with danoctober’s remarks that revenge should have been on all those not just his wife and Steve. They were worse than Steve in that they restrained him. They all needed a got beardown and the wives needed to be punished as well. To bad there is no chapter 2 “Consequences” rather than a sappy ending. That could come later after he takes care of the others.

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by Anonymous07/14/18

Serious Poker

Anyone who is serious about playing poker KNOWS the rules - National and International. One rule that is inviolate: If you cannot fully meet a bet, you do NOT lose and forfeit everything you have in the pot. You are on the hook only to the extent of the cash and/or credit available to you at the game. Concomitantly, if you win the hand, you can only win an amount in the pot that is equal to the amount of your total wager. If two or more other players are still playing the same hand, they can continue to raise each other, and those raises form a side pot which would go to the best hand held by one of those two or more other players, naturally excluding the "tapped out" player(s) from any claim to that side pot.

In the story, assuming only Mark and Cathy were still playing the hand, once Cathy committed her last dollar in a bet, the round ends and a winner is then decided on the best hand. Mark cannot continue raising the bet beyond what Cathy could monetarily match or meet. Which also means that no other kind of bet need be accepted or met. The round is over; to the best hand goes the pot. There is no possible way of extorting a "blow job" bet from anyone. One should add, that any "alternative" bet that is offered has to be one that can and would be acceptable to and by EVERY player, not just those still in the round. So unless Mark is willing to give another male player a blow job, he doesn't get to ask for or accept one from Cathy.

Fundamental national and international poker rules.

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by Anonymous07/17/18

OMG! Just shoot me now!

Another good start ruined by an unbelievable finish! Do you simply hate your leading male characters? So Henry gets his divorce. Okay. That was one way to go. But once he goes there, why stay in the area? Not only has he lost his wife, but he's lost all his friends that were present at the poker game party and thought it was okay to allow his wife to give Mark a blowjob. I don't care that he beat Mark up. What about the REST of the people present? Nothing makes that blowjob go away. It will be discussed and talked about until everyone involved dies. No escaping her actions. And as the divorce becomes final she shows up with some lame excuse about being in therapy and that makes her actions either understandable or forgivable? He forgets about the blowjob? Do they find new friends? Do they move away? Why wouldn't he ask for a transfer immediately? You want us to believe that therapy, less than a year, some violence and a drink makes everything okay? Even for a fictional storyline, THAT was complete bullshit! Once again, you write a good story and ruin it at the end. UGH!

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