All Comments  for

Blow Job Bet

byBigGuy33©
All
Comments (136)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Ruttweiler11/06/17

I voted five stars

Four for the story and one extra to balance the morons who write things like “pathetic cuck shit”.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by c24j11/06/17

Dang it . . . good but I want just a touch more revenge.

I would have asked the wives . . . okay, tell your husbands you had to give me a blow job to try and keep me and Cathy together. NEVER tell them it didn't happen. Just tell them it was the only thing I'd accept to get even for their restraining me. Tell them it's only a blow job.
Find some way to make Mark's life miserable for a while.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous11/09/17

not enough

Fine Mark got tuned up, but what about three guys who restrained him and were going to make him watch?

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous11/10/17

Oh please!

You're going to kiss and tongue that same mouth and suck off Mark by proxy? Hell no. Big Guy you make me wonder if you're a closet creampie aficionado.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous11/11/17

Shitty cuckold/wimp crap!!!

That author is realy into cuckold/wimp fantasy!!!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous11/11/17

It wasn't bad writing

But I couldn't stomach the cuckiness. She gave another man a blow job while other men stopped her husband from interfearing and while he was begging her not to. What kind of useless person would trust someone who treated them so shabbily.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by ErotFan11/27/17

@c24j

I like your thinking!
P.S. Good flash story, BigGuy... many stars.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Schwanze112/09/17

Pain

retribution and ruination. Killing is too good for the bastards who did this to him.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by FD4512/09/17

The fight should have left him sooner

As soon as she choose to honor that bet past his protests, that would have done it for me.

My suspension of disbelief got sort of twisted up in this one. On the one hand not one wife, husband, onlooker or even Mark had the foresight that God gave a guppy. "Do I really want to get blown by the wife of this guy who looks like I am a walking dead man?"

That being said, 'key parties' used to be a 'thing' in the Sixties, so I guess it is possible that all of them got lost in the moment.

***

I am always entertained by these guys who go on about 'cock sucker by proxy' at kissing a woman who gave out a blow job. Were their women oral virgins? Wanna bet? So what is the half life of cock sucking to make her mouth 'kissable' again?

Does that mean when they kiss their sweeties who suck them off, they are sucking their own cocks? Seems like an excuse to be outraged.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Pappy712/18/17

I agree with the comment

about the guys that held his arms. I would have crippled them just as soon as I could. And I still think that this thing had gone on before she was married to the current husband. The level of non-verbal communication was just too great.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Schwanze101/13/18

HarryinVA October

Exactly. Said much better than I did.

Seems Biguy is all about poking the bear.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by CaOldDog01/22/18

Great story

Full 5* marks for a story that makes sense and is told with the thoughts of "real people".

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous01/23/18

Huecuck says "schwanze" is Swahili for

"cuck in a closet"

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Schwanze101/28/18

Schwanze1

says anon critics are, by definition, pussies.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Schwanze102/02/18

JKMJJ

Oh HELL yes. Best comment yet.

And a big fuck you to the author for writing this turd.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by weathermanks02/06/18

Thanks

Thanks for the good ending. I was wondering how you'd end it.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous02/12/18

Another fucked up ending

Why would he take her back? Sure, maybe she's stopped gambling. But that's until the next "sure thing" comes along. And why didn't he expose his ex-wife's actions and the actions of all their friends to EVERYONE?? What would Alison and Mary's friends and family think about things? And then to take her back? What are they? Richard Burton and Elizabeth Taylor for freaking sakes? Once again, an awful ending. Have you been reading MM stories and recycling his wimp husbands????

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous02/12/18

I Talked To A Lawyer Friend

I explained the circumstances of this story to him. He said the three men who held the husband could be charged with unlawful restraint. Marc, Cathy and the two wives could be charged as accessories. Seven people could be facing stiff fines, if not time in jail. Then the husband could file Alienation of Affection petitions against Marc, the three husbands and the two wives. That's some heavy consequences so that Marc can get a blowjob. I find it odd that the card games evaporated when just one player, Cathy, quit attending. That puts the intent of the games in question.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by danoctober02/13/18

Very interesting.

Well written. But I could imagine the husband seeking revenge on everyone . Ugly evil revenge. Lot's of bodies to get rid of revenge. No mercy.
*****

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by sbrooks103x02/15/18

This Is a Partial Repeat, But...

Even for a silly-ass story, there needs to be some internal logic, and refusing to take cash to settle a bet isn't welching on the bet. The blow job represented a certain amount of money, and as long as that money was paid, then the bet was honored.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous02/22/18

Never said

Wife admitted she was wrong finally but never apologized or said she was sorry.

anon.1

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous03/08/18

no excuses

Can't believe you have bim take ber back. Everything he said and felt was true. And ALL the people in tbat room need the same physical lain Mark received.

As ended thjs is stupid.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by desertdog4303/15/18

Mark got beat up.

How bout the 3 bastards who held him against his will ? THUMP THUMP THUMP...

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by danoctober03/21/18

I would love to do a follow up.

All those involved would one by one suffer in the most horrible twisted ways.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Ezrollin05/23/18

An entertaining story but...

He can blame Mark and the three guys holding him but it was the wife giving the blow job. Would I have gone after them one by one later...maybe but it wouldn't have changed the facts...if you're that wrong about what her values were when you married her what makes you think you're any better at judging them now?

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous05/23/18

What’s amazing to me is.....

The commenters miss the whole point. Was this a good and well told story? Yes it was! This wasn’t a retelling of actual events, prompting the characters, invented in the mind of the author, to take this or that action. It’s a story, damn it. All praise to the author for a well done effort.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by danoctober05/29/18

Hmmm...

This a great story up until he decides to reconcile. That part was a bit hard to understand, but it did give an idea for a different type of response. Still a great story.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by BarbieKen06/06/18

Actually, a nice told story.

It took me a while while reading it to actually grasp the story. It was well told and I could get a real feeling for it. Thanks

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by timriv06/08/18

Have to agree with danoctober’s remarks that revenge should have been on all those not just his wife and Steve. They were worse than Steve in that they restrained him. They all needed a got beardown and the wives needed to be punished as well. To bad there is no chapter 2 “Consequences” rather than a sappy ending. That could come later after he takes care of the others.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous07/17/18

OMG! Just shoot me now!

Another good start ruined by an unbelievable finish! Do you simply hate your leading male characters? So Henry gets his divorce. Okay. That was one way to go. But once he goes there, why stay in the area? Not only has he lost his wife, but he's lost all his friends that were present at the poker game party and thought it was okay to allow his wife to give Mark a blowjob. I don't care that he beat Mark up. What about the REST of the people present? Nothing makes that blowjob go away. It will be discussed and talked about until everyone involved dies. No escaping her actions. And as the divorce becomes final she shows up with some lame excuse about being in therapy and that makes her actions either understandable or forgivable? He forgets about the blowjob? Do they find new friends? Do they move away? Why wouldn't he ask for a transfer immediately? You want us to believe that therapy, less than a year, some violence and a drink makes everything okay? Even for a fictional storyline, THAT was complete bullshit! Once again, you write a good story and ruin it at the end. UGH!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by ScorpioJJ07/29/18

Just Mark got beat up?

Anyone who touched him to hold him back should have been punished severely.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous08/06/18

In Reality

It is just a matter of time before she does it again.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous08/12/18

FUCKING PATHETIC

This story is a pile of shit 10 feet high.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous09/25/18

Not a badly written story - as usual for this author

But sadly - as usual for this author - the leading man either misplaces his spine or decides he has no pride or self respect. The first thing that comes to mind is calling the police and having those that restrained him arrested. Might be hard to get any witnesses to that crime. At the end, it felt like she just made up some hairy horseshit excuse to lure him back and he went for it hook, line and sinker. Why would only Mark get beat up? What about the rest of those so-called "friends" that were in attendance? Are they still seeing them outside the game or have they tried to find new friends since the game broke up. Really not a decent or likable person in this mess. Certainly no friends in sight. Feeling the way he does, why didn't he seek either a transfer or a new job in another area, far, far away? That way he wouldn't have been around for Cathy to even talk to. You can write. You just have an annoying tendency towards wimpy, spineless men. Not good. Not good at all.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by etchiboy09/30/18

If she and Mark were within range...

I’d a let them start, then kicked the back of her head as hard as I could. Talk about “marked” (he-he)

Yeah. Got back together waaaaay to easily.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/03/18

Did he keep the same friends ?

Why do we expect so little from life/ your mate and individual that has your back/….We are dead as a society/ if we had a long time girl friend " that did something as heinous" we would dump her in a heart beat .. /With all her consoling she still going to have the morals of an alley cat....it's about morality/dupe's.!..And pride, never heals itself..Every time you have an argument you'll remember that special day you felt that earth shattering embarrassment "/ it will not go away... only a fool would think outer wise.... The American writer shure are spineless goons.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Blow Job Bet  or
More submissions by BigGuy33.

More Comments (136 total): Page:  1  2  3 

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

Refresh ImageYou may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel