All Comments on 'My Hot Teacher'

Oh puuuuuh -leeease... go read some decent stories. Try to create real characters, a real plot, work on how to write a conversation... wham-bam thank you ma'am between two characters with the depth of a speck of dust is just plain boring...

Hey give a person a break, it's hard enough deciding to submit a store, let alone having others make comments. bothofus, continue to work on your writing, maybe continue with this relationship or start another, but DONT stop writing.

While the characters, plot, and background were non-existant, it was a nice quick synopsis of an enduring fantasy of many young men. Maybe in the future some time spent explaining why a poor test score was so critical, why the teacher was a nympho in heat, and why the janitor dodn't appear to wash the boards and make it a 3-way. ;-)

YOUR USE OF DIALOGUE SHOWS YOU HAVE SOME IDEA WHERE YOU WANT TO GO. KEEP WRITING!

Oh come on people. Everyone had a different style of writing. Some people have what it takes and others don't. This was a good quick "jerk" story. My thanks to the writer.

Suggest that you get an editor.

The first comment entitled "yawn". Typically this was by Anonymous. Frightened of saying who you are, then? I bet you've never written anything yourself, never mind submitting it, which takes a bit of time and trouble just so that such as you can criticise unfairly. I hate the anonymous unfair critics who never give an author a due for his/her effort. So, I shall sign myself.

Do you really mean that they had a "bulleting" board in the classroom, or was it a "bulletin" board?

It is mistakes like this that spoil the flow of a story.

It is very insubstantial - and the degree of swearing is unnecessarily sad and sacrilegious.

You can improve a great by reading some of the more successful stories on this board.

That type of response is more than "typical" when it comes to the biggest morons who find themselves online. If people who haven't written erotic stories have no right to be critical, then they have no right to be positive either by that same logic.

While it was short without much depth in the characters, it was a quick fantasy story. I enjoyed it very much and hope that you keep writing. It let me fill in the blanks myself on how the characters looked and so forth.

Thanks

it was alright, but you need something to really get the story going. it was a short, simple boring story. you need to work your way up for it to be interesting, instead of it just happening. maybe add another chapter. x

Wow. it made me cum :)