All Comments on 'My Mom Ch. 02'

Fairly decent, but you don't go into any detail. You completely skip the entire episode after the mother giving head. It almost seems as if you dont want to write the story. For the next chapters you should make them much longer and go into greater detail. Otherwise you will have a bad story on your hands.

I said that I'd eat you out, but then I didn't. I was selfish and wanted to fuck your pussy again first. I'd planned on eating you out after we'd had a shower together, but then Aunt Cathy shows up and wrecks everything. I'll eat your pussy good mom, as soon as we get the chance.