All Comments on 'Take Top This Time'

Note to the author. Suggest you group the chapters together and number them chapters 1, 2, 3 etc instead of having them scattered about with a remark that this follows such and such tale. This seems to be a fault with several of your stories.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

I never write stories with the intention of including additional "chapters." I include follow-ups whenever they cry out for one and/or readers request one. Each story can stand on its own. I'd mark chapters only if I set out to write a novel or novella.

Chur bro awesome story

It needs more meat and potatoes.

***Thanks for the read.