All Comments on 'Long Weekend Away'

Another delightful romp in Scotland. It was nice to learn more of Jane in this one. Not sure either is true, but this one is less so with far less intro of players. Both stories would have benefited by more distinctive character descriptions, whose prominent features are repeated several times to help the reader keep them straight.

It would have added to the excitement of both stories if we were told more of Jane and Rob's prior experience with swinging - would have added considerably to the tension and drama of their participation. But delicious stories nonetheless. Hope Jane will continue writing!