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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/21/04

Quiet?

Good, simple stuff. It would have been nice to know their relationship.
Lukas

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by Anonymous10/21/04

Stylish

Mood capture is effective. Not a story requiring character development or dialogue - I would like to see you expand your potential a little perhaps in either of those directions.

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