All Comments on 'A Woman's Yearning'

by Selena_Kitt

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TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
sounds like

good things are on their way....

some nice language here and it's simple and direct.

Good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Brilliant !

Brilliant!!

The yearning of a woman waiting for companionship comes through vividly.

I just tumbled upon your writings and I am overwhelmed with your talent.

~ Love from the Himalayas

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

An engine rumbling indeed;

She could put most things mechanical to shame

With passion that none possess...

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Waiting

Broken promises ~ I wait in vain and unfullfilled.

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