All Comments on 'Sweet Boy Ch. 03'

This is not a story

What a letdown!

This was the sweetness of love and the spice of passion in perfect balance of a son's love for his mother😀Just a delight😁

i agree with Kerry nice story gave it a four.

each chapter needed some fleshing out but was good.. until this one..

You hve him go into the kitchen and jerk off and slink away.

would love to see this story continue

Excellent work

Though not the most erotic, not a criticism, it is well written and interesting enough to keep me reading. I gave it a four.

I hope there's going to be a part 4

He should figure a way to fuck louisa

This feels like more of an interlude than a full chapter. It doesn't even feel like a full sex scene: he comes in, witnesses the very end of some sex, and leaves. The only effect on him is that he thinks it's hot (he doesn't even react much to the fact that it's his mom he's watching). It's a one-page anecdote, and a pretty weak ending to the story after two hot chapters--assuming it's the end, which seems a safe assumption since it hasn't been added to in years.