All Comments on 'Slave of the Orc Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please Keep this up

This could get really good, and you could go a few different avenues with it. If you want you could have them fall in love over time, or have her become a submissive entirely and become a mindless fuck-toy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Too many grammatical errors.

This is terrible writing.

StripesthetoyStripesthetoyabout 1 year ago

Little to rapey for me personally. Just doesn't seem to make sense saying "she the most beautiful creature the orc had ever seen" to "I'ma fuck her dry and literally destroy the asshole I was just praising"

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